note: not really bugs per se ... if this is not the right place for this sort of review let me know- if any of this is useful happy to make a pass through the rest ... the "basement" one stuck out as misleading as the structure does have a basement so I loaded eWPDA to look at the others Build: v1.10 4214 Mode: Survival, SP Seed-id: any Repo: always Severity: minor Type: PDA Description: pda_aqSCiiK .. should read "found indications of a nearby village" or "indications of several nearby villages" not indices (the plural of index- an ordered list) pda_GSuwS .. should be titled "Locate the settlement" not Follow the indices (see previous & IDA only marks a single settlement) pda_SCq4a .. should read "might have found a settlement." (see previous- IDA only ids a single settlement, not multiple) pda_M0eWe .. should read "around the base" not basement (the spiders to attack are outside and not under the structure) pda_aqGeO .. should read "Clear the area of spiders" not from (preposition from denotes origin- not used in this context) pda_i8QuuW8 .. should read "picking up increased power levels" not raising (adjective increased in this context- not raising, a gerund verb) pda_tq08WmK .. should read "suggest curing it" not to (use of gerund verb ending in -ing rather than infinitive "to" + verb) pda_aKO8S .. unless intentional "Gratification" should be replaced with "Reward" (the first indicates player pleasure/emotion is the reward vs. actually getting stuff (and has potentially unintended connotations depends on how much the blacksmith likes you))
